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Thanks for writing, but the random bolding of words was a big distraction for me.

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Thanks, David! I appreciate the feedback. I DO tend to lean heavily on the use of bolding to provide emphasis. I especially don't want it to appear random, but your comment leads me to believe that I didn't achieve that result. I'll try to moderate its use in the future.

Thanks again for the feedback!

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Thanks for sharing your thoughts Alan! Was nice to read your writing again!

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Thank you, Mindy!

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